Tuesday, March 18, 2014

5 senses

WALT describe using the 5 senses
  • look                                                           Look = Blue
  • hear                                                           Hear = Green
  • taste                                                          Taste = Yellow
  • smell                                                          Smell = Purple
  • feel or touch                                             Feel or Touch = Red

My scene:

As I gallop along the beach I can feel the wind all over my tail and mane. Suddenly I could see my mum  galloping in front of me so I carry on galloping but I got faster and faster till I got up to my mum. Then I was going faster then my mum  wasn’t  happy about me being in front of her. So I went behind my mum again then my mum was much happier. Then I could smell food so I went where the food smell was coming from then I could Hear the kids in the brush then I zoomed out of the brush because our owner called our names she said Coco which is my mums name and Willow which is my name. Then she led us to the horse float and feed as an apple each mmmm that tastes so yum. So In the end it was a great day.

                                                      The End

                                                      By Kayla

5 comments:

  1. Cool senses story Kayla

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  2. cool senses story kayla i like how you put like green for hear, purple for smell,yellow for taste,red for feel or touch.

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  3. Great use of your 5 senses. I like the story. Keep up the good work.

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  4. You used your 5 senses very well keep up the good work Kayla!!

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